"In addition to the whole video that complement the title very-well, we have this "player" trying to make his way to the top and that is what explains the title "Fly Me to the Moon". He wants to get to the top so that he can be with the people being with the "stars" the famous people. And then there are many people getting in his way, which is the thing that is trying to kill him/ bring him down! And once he makes it to the top he is rewarded with many gold coins and a crown hat. This symbolizes his achievement!
Every time I click the link to this video I just cannot help but watch it, it has a smooth but chill beat to it that draws my attentions to it… this video has brought me to wonder about more sonic animation videos that may grab my attention as this one did."
This is a submission posted by a student from another Ety class. They focused on summarizing the video and explaining their direct reaction to it such as "Every time I click the link to this video I just cannot help but watch it." They did a good job of telling what happened in the text, but this assignment needed to be analyzed at a deeper level. The writer could have told how the main character in the video felt when he reached the "stars" or how the others in the video reacted to his success. Again, this is a good summary, but not a very strong analysis.
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